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Critique by MarioT209 MarioT209/critique/1446807048">Nov 21, 2016, 10:54:59 PM
Wow, I must say you have done a fantastic job with this animation! Combining elements such as the music and the battle scars on the characters just gives a clear symbolic message that they've fought their hardest to achieve their goal. (I assume it was saving Ponyville from destruction, judging the first shot.) Even though I've noticed a few lighting errors on the buildings and mountains + a few odd jiggle-bone animation from the ponies' manes, these errors can easily be forgiven thanks to the animation's message and beautiful scenery. Also, that lens flare tho :3

Great Job, bro! Keep it up! ^^
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:iconmagicwizard24:
magicwizard24 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
What's the set up here?
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:icontsuriadragon:
TsuriaDragon Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
more will be explain in the future :)
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:iconsugarcube2:
sugarcube2 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016
This is beautiful animation, all it needs is Sunset Shimmer and it will be PERFECT! Sunset Shimmer EqG (clapping) plz 
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:icontsuriadragon:
TsuriaDragon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
sadly she's in the equestria girl series D:
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:iconsugarcube2:
sugarcube2 Featured By Owner Edited Nov 20, 2016
so? this is YOUR universe and YOUR animation, so don't let Hasbro stop you from letting her be part of YOUR imagination!:iconsunsethappyplz: 
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:icongreenmint4265:
GreenMint4265 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016
Amazing Job with this poster, Tsuria! Looks nice and epic! ^^
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:iconscarletdawnset:
ScarletDawnset Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fantastic! Simply beautiful. Very well-done
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:icontsuriadragon:
TsuriaDragon Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks
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:iconscarletdawnset:
ScarletDawnset Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome
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:iconlinormusicbeatpone:
LinorMusicbeatPONE Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
This is so beautiful.
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:icontsuriadragon:
TsuriaDragon Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks ^^
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:iconjordan-da-lego-brony:
Nice!!!
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:iconschorpioen007:
schorpioen007 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016
Amazing ^^
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:icontsuriadragon:
TsuriaDragon Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks ^^
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:iconschorpioen007:
schorpioen007 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
You're welcome ^^
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:iconjordan-da-lego-brony:
What's the premise of this project? What is this "never ending fight" about?
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:icontsuriadragon:
TsuriaDragon Featured By Owner Edited Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
You've see in the future =p
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:iconforsakenknightmare:
ForsakenKnightmare Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What have you got in mind this time Tsuria last time i got a teaser it was argo lol this should be good
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:icontsuriadragon:
TsuriaDragon Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Soon
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:iconnicolovisky:
Nicolovisky Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Student Digital Artist
good
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:iconautoaudi:
AutoAudi Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Looks awesomee so far! I agree with what that guy said, but I can see that you put in a lotta effort in this scene.
And Twilight looks dirty dirty, I wonder what happened ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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:icontsuriadragon:
TsuriaDragon Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Hopefully will be good :)
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:iconautoaudi:
AutoAudi Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
HEY *good luck poke*
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:iconscarletdawnset:
ScarletDawnset Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fantastic! Excellent colors, hues, detail, and musical score. The only thing I'd like to point out is that the zoom-out kind of hits an awkward end as it reaches the road, and that Twilight keeps moving her legs after she stops walking. Other than that, this is divine! Most fantastic and ominous. Can't wait for more!
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:icontsuriadragon:
TsuriaDragon Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Ah thanks for the tip this is a draft will make improvements :D
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:iconscarletdawnset:
ScarletDawnset Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're most welcome. I look forward to seeing more
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:icontsuriadragon:
TsuriaDragon Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Long way to go :)
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:iconscarletdawnset:
ScarletDawnset Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem. You can't rush great art.
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